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Second Chapter of the great Story of Muschio Malto! Staff-management is always a problem...
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About the flash:
I created it using the pictures and lines from a text-RPG from tgchan: [link] So, that's neither my story nor my characters nor pictures. The one drawing this was someone named "weaver": [link] My part was creating the flash, Navigation, Actionscript, some Typesetting and arranging.
Statistics: about 800 objects in 140 frames from 70 rpg-pictures.
Second flash I made... I would like to have some feedback, but I don't get much of that usually, so I don't have high expectations.
these are brilliant you made a good choice of comments from the original posts (and i'm amazed you had the patience to read through them all!). are you planning to do all 23 chapters? (well, 24 when the next one is completed).
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i'm not evil...i just have a different view on "good"
it's the the easily entertained people who get the most out of life
i don't care if you asked a stupid question, i'm still giving you a stupid answer
Well, yes I'm planning that. Maybe when I got holiday, I will be faster doing them... It's maybe about 20 hours for one, but I currently don't have so much time on a day^^
But I must correct you: I didn't just read through all the comments. I read through them 3 times^^ That's because I need to know which comments are leading further or just funny, which one are regarding to which (you noticed that the posting-numbers on tgchan are kind of misleading?^^) plus a last rereading for some additional stuff I could post in some kind of appendix...
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i know what you mean about not having enough time in a day 20 hours is a lot, but probably half the time it would take me to do something like this. flash does not like me.
3 times?! that is some serious dedication. the later chapters get even more confusing when you're trying to sort through which post replies to which, and what everyone is talking about. still, i'm sure you'll be able to cope, and some of the comments are just hilarious
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i'm not evil...i just have a different view on "good"
it's the the easily entertained people who get the most out of life
i don't care if you asked a stupid question, i'm still giving you a stupid answer
eventhough I've already read all existing chapters already, it's fun to read it like this too And the insane suggestions from the Sphere are of course, as insane as ever. Though you seem to make an effort into filtering out the worst of em haha
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Team Alucard for the win! Fairies with a bloodfetish are anything but real vampires. Real vampires are drop dead gorgeous, bloodsucking monsters!
Thanks! Well, I don't post every comment as most of them a reappearing... I try to include every comment that is somehow funny or represents the atmosphere. I even read the chapter three times to get some cross-references^^
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